People often ask me what it’s like to write about the past. One of the things I find most challenging is portraying how the people of the time felt. I have not lived through a war, so I have to go on what others tell me, or what I’ve read. Recently, the Surgeon General warned of a “Pearl Harbor moment” as America faced down one of the toughest weeks with COVID-19. As an author of WWII fiction set in Hawaii, I began to think about the similarities between the Day of Infamy and the current pandemic.
Every time I write one of my WWII novels, I am faced with the task of trying to put myself in the shoes of characters who were living through experiences I can only imagine. The raw fear and uncertainty of when the next bombs might fall is something hard to conjure up in your mind. Though I grew up on the stories of my parents and grandparents–who lived through the war here in Hawaii, and I’ve read countless firsthand accounts, it still does not equate to knowing how they felt. Even into her old age, my grandmother remembered many of those marines and soldiers who camped out on her living room floor, hoping to get a sense of home and family before shipping out to Iwo Jima. She always cried when she spoke about the ones who didn’t make it back. The stamp of war left an indelible mark on her heart. In 2018, I had just returned to Oahu from the Big Island for my father’s funeral, when an alert sounded on my phone. It was early morning and my boyfriend and I were preparing for a short hike out to a WWII bunker that overlooks the ocean near our house. I casually glanced down and saw these words on the screen: EMERGENCY ALERT: INCOMING BALLISTIC MISSILE THREAT INBOUND TO HAWAII. SEEK IMMEDIATE SHELTER. THIS IS NOT A DRILL. I reread the message in a strange state of shock, told my boyfriend, who seemed unfazed, and hurried him out the door. If a ballistic missile was coming, a WWII bunker seemed like a good place to be. At the bunker, we encountered several soldiers out for a run, all very serious faced and on their phones. None knew for sure what was happening. It was about forty minutes before the all clear message came, but in that time, I got a small dose of the terror that the people of Hawaii lived with for years during WWII. This is not a drill. Those were the same words broadcast throughout the islands in 1941. While writing my novel, The Lieutenant’s Nurse, a Pearl Harbor story, I was able to draw from this small reservoir of fear. Fast forward to 2020, and I’ve been getting a similar feeling: that life as we know it has suddenly shifted and things might never be the same. Being on an island in the middle of the Pacific has its pros and cons. We have plenty of fresh air and sunshine, but are heavily reliant on imported food and goods. Any kind of breakdown in supply is potentially catastrophic. On December 8, 1941, lines stacked up outside of grocery stores, which were ordered to close at 4:30 pm and not open again until they had taken inventory. It was found that Oahu had a 37 day supply of most staple foods and 75 day supply of flour and cereals. With Japanese subs lurking in the surrounding waters, ships had all but ceased movement to and from the islands. Everyone was given a ration booklet and Martial Law ordered, with blackouts and curfews and evacuation orders. There are no blackouts here now, but Mayor Kawakami on Kauai has put in place a curfew and a curfew was announced on Oahu over Easter weekend. Anything not deemed essential has been shuttered and we are ordered to shelter in place. Recently, at a book club event where many in attendance were youngsters during the Pearl Harbor attack, they all remembered not having butter, and how butter became a hot commodity. Now, it’s toilet paper. Which I find curious because you can’t eat toilet paper. In my novels, I have written about characters using ration tickets and growing Victory Gardens. One of the first things I did when the pandemic began ramping up, was to buy seeds and plant that garden I’ve been talking about for years now. I suspect a lot of people are doing the same. It’s a huge wake up call for anyone who relies on others for food, which is pretty much everyone. Hawaii is also a strategic location between the United States and Asia, which makes us both useful and vulnerable. When the bombs fell on Pearl Harbor, 2403 people were killed. As of this writing, only twelve people have died from COVID-19 in Hawaii, but over 45,000 have died in the United States, and the pandemic is far from over. Instead of waiting for another wave of attack, we are steeling ourselves for more possible waves of sickness if we let up our guard too soon. In Hawaii, we have the unique capability of being able to close off our borders and stop planes from bringing visitors to the state. Have we done that? No. Residents are begging the governor to take a stand, but for some reason, he hasn’t. I sense the desperation in people here, who are only several generations beyond war and a devastating Smallpox epidemic, who want to save their families and communities from a repeat tragedy. It’s scary. I feel it. And as I wrap up my fourth novel, Radar Girls, about the top secret Women’s Air Raid Defense here in Hawaii, I am beginning to understand.
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Right now, more than ever, I'm turning to books for a little escapism. From Paris to Key West to Hawaii, these stories all sound amazing to me, and I'm excited to be transported to another place and time. Read about them below.
THE PARIS LIBRARY Based on the true World War II story of the heroic librarians at the American Library in Paris, this is an unforgettable story of romance, friendship, family, and the power of literature to bring us together, perfect for fans of The Lilac Girls and The Paris Wife. Paris, 1939: Young and ambitious Odile Souchet has it all: her handsome police officer beau and a dream job at the American Library in Paris. When the Nazis march into Paris, Odile stands to lose everything she holds dear, including her beloved library. Together with her fellow librarians, Odile joins the Resistance with the best weapons she has: books. But when the war finally ends, instead of freedom, Odile tastes the bitter sting of unspeakable betrayal. Montana, 1983: Lily is a lonely teenager looking for adventure in small-town Montana. Her interest is piqued by her solitary, elderly neighbor. As Lily uncovers more about her neighbor’s mysterious past, she finds that they share a love of language, the same longings, and the same intense jealousy, never suspecting that a dark secret from the past connects them. A powerful novel that explores the consequences of our choices and the relationships that make us who we are—family, friends, and favorite authors--The Paris Library shows that extraordinary heroism can sometimes be found in the quietest of places. (Note: due to COVID-19, the release date is pushed back to 2021) Buy here, support your local bookstore! THE JANE AUSTEN SOCIETY Just after the Second World War, in the small English village of Chawton, an unusual but like-minded group of people band together to attempt something remarkable. One hundred and fifty years ago, Chawton was the final home of Jane Austen, one of England's finest novelists. Now it's home to a few distant relatives and their diminishing estate. With the last bit of Austen's legacy threatened, a group of disparate individuals come together to preserve both Jane Austen's home and her legacy. These people—a laborer, a young widow, the local doctor, and a movie star, among others—could not be more different and yet they are united in their love for the works and words of Austen. As each of them endures their own quiet struggle with loss and trauma, some from the recent war, others from more distant tragedies, they rally together to create the Jane Austen Society. A powerful and moving novel that explores the tragedies and triumphs of life, both large and small, and the universal humanity in us all, The Jane Austen Society is destined to resonate with readers for years to come. Buy here, support your local bookstore! LAST TRAIN TO KEY WEST In 1935 three women are forever changed when one of the most powerful hurricanes in history barrels toward the Florida Keys in New York Times bestselling author Chanel Cleeton's captivating new novel. Everyone journeys to Key West searching for something. For the tourists traveling on Henry Flagler's legendary Overseas Railroad, Labor Day weekend is an opportunity to forget the economic depression gripping the nation. But one person's paradise can be another's prison, and Key West-native Helen Berner yearns to escape. The Cuban Revolution of 1933 left Mirta Perez's family in a precarious position. After an arranged wedding in Havana, Mirta arrives in the Keys on her honeymoon. While she can't deny the growing attraction to the stranger she's married, her new husband's illicit business interests may threaten not only her relationship, but her life. Elizabeth Preston's trip from New York to Key West is a chance to save her once-wealthy family from their troubles as a result of the Wall Street crash. Her quest takes her to the camps occupied by veterans of the Great War and pairs her with an unlikely ally on a treacherous hunt of his own. Over the course of the holiday weekend, the women's paths cross unexpectedly, and the danger swirling around them is matched only by the terrifying force of the deadly storm threatening the Keys. Buy here, support your local bookstore! FAST GIRLS Acclaimed author Elise Hooper explores the gripping, real life history of female athletes, members of the first integrated women’s Olympic team, and their journeys to the 1936 summer games in Berlin, Nazi Germany. This inspiring story is based on the real lives of three little-known trailblazing women Olympians. Perfect for readers who love untold stories of amazing women, such as The Only Woman in the Room, Hidden Figures, and The Lost Girls of Paris. In the 1928 Olympics, Chicago’s Betty Robinson competes as a member of the first-ever women’s delegation in track and field. Destined for further glory, she returns home feted as America’s Golden Girl until a nearly-fatal airplane crash threatens to end everything. Outside of Boston, Louise Stokes, one of the few black girls in her town, sees competing as an opportunity to overcome the limitations placed on her. Eager to prove that she has what it takes to be a champion, she risks everything to join the Olympic team. From Missouri, Helen Stephens, awkward, tomboyish, and poor, is considered an outcast by her schoolmates, but she dreams of escaping the hardships of her farm life through athletic success. Her aspirations appear impossible until a chance encounter changes her life. These three athletes will join with others to defy society’s expectations of what women can achieve. As tensions bring the United States and Europe closer and closer to the brink of war, Betty, Louise, and Helen must fight for the chance to compete as the fastest women in the world amidst the pomp and pageantry of the Nazi-sponsored 1936 Olympics in Berlin. Buy here, support your local bookstore! THE ENGINEER'S WIFE "When Emily Warren Roebling marries Captain Washington 'Wash' Roebling-the handsome, charming soldier of her dreams, and her brother's dear friend and aide during the Civil War-a lifetime of family fun and happiness seems within her grasp. But then Wash accepts the position as Chief Engineer on his father's magnum opus, the Brooklyn Bridge, and it changes both of their lives forever. In Brooklyn, the happy home they'd dreamed of warps around the bridge. Incapacitated from working in the high-pressure tanks at the bridge's foundations, Wash convinces Emily to be his messenger to the site. Little by little, Emily finds herself taking over the project-with no formal training or education in math and science. Emily throws herself into building the bridge but faces suspicion and disparagement at every turn as she supervises dangerous construction sites and argues for the safety of the bridge amongst Manhattan's male elite. The Engineer's Wife delivers an emotional portrait of a woman transformed by a project of unfathomable scale, and of a husband and wife determined to build something that lasts--even at the risk of losing each other." Buy here, support your local bookstore! RED SKY OVER HAWAII Inspired by real places and events of WWII, Red Sky Over Hawaii immerses the reader in a time of American history full of suspicion and peril in this lush and poignant tale about the indisputable power of doing the right thing against all odds. The attack on Pearl Harbor changes everything for Lana Hitchcock. Arriving home on the Big Island too late to reconcile with her estranged father, she is left alone to untangle the clues of his legacy, which lead to a secret property tucked away in the remote rain forest of Kilauea volcano. When the government starts taking away her neighbors as suspected sympathizers, Lana shelters two young German girls, a Japanese fisherman and his son. As tensions escalate, they are forced into hiding—only to discover the hideaway house is not what they expected. When a detainment camp is established nearby, Lana struggles to keep the secrets of those in her care. Trust could have dangerous consequences. As their lives weave together, Lana begins to understand the true meaning of family and how the bonds of love carry us through the worst times. Buy here, support your local bookstore! Looking for some great reads on Pearl Harbor and wartime Hawaii? Look no further. Hawaii is the only place in the United States where war was literally on our doorstep. During WWII, my grandfather was the school principal in a small sugarcane town called Honoka’a and my grandmother was a teacher. She never tired of telling stories about the war and the soldiers who came to their house while on liberty, and as a young girl, I never tired of hearing them. My favorite stories were of Roscoe, the lion featured in my first novel, ISLAND OF SWEET PIES AND SOLDIERS. Yes, the marines smuggled in an African lion to Camp Tarawa and made him their mascot!
What also stuck with me was how the war so deeply impacted the people of Hawaii. It was such a frightening and dark time, and yet such a meaningful time. People here banded together and befriended the marines before they sailed off to Iwo Jima and Saipan. For many of those men, this was their last stop before dying in battle. When I wrote Island of Sweet Pies and Soldiers, The Lieutenant’s Nurse and Red Sky Over Hawaii, I wanted to portray not only the fear but the enduring friendships and hope and courage that came along with it. Though these stories are fictional, the backdrop and many of events are real. The first three here are mine, and below that are books that were instrumental in my research. I highly recommend all of them: RED SKY OVER HAWAII Releases June 9, 2020. "Ackerman's effortless writing skillfully navigates the early days of WWII with captivating characters bonded by circumstance. Mystery and magic are woven around Lana and the pages of this book, delivering a beautiful and thoughtful novel that pays tribute to the lore of the islands, their people, and those who stand up for the ones who cannot." THE LIEUTENANT'S NURSE “The Lieutenant's Nurse weaves a tale of love and courage. Bittersweet and suspenseful, it offers readers a firsthand, female perspective of the harrowing days surrounding Pearl Harbor, honoring both the complexities of war and resilience of the human spirit." A USA Today bestseller & Historical Novel Society Editor's Choice. ISLAND OF SWEET PIES AND SOLDIERS "Island of Sweet Pies and Soldiers is part mystery and part history. The setting of Hawaii during the expansion of WWII into the Pacific theater is uniquely captivating. A must-read historical fiction, an emotional and evocative story of an era not so long ago when war was literally on our doorstep. Don't miss this impressive debut novel!" The number one best selling book at the Honolulu airport in 2018, and a Barnes & Noble book club pick. PEARL HARBOR: FROM INFAMY TO GREATNESS, by Craig Nelson. This book is well written, hard to put down, and includes countless poignant stories about the brave souls who experienced the attack firsthand. “Beginning in 1914, bestselling author Craig Nelson maps the road to war, when Franklin D. Roosevelt, then the Assistant Secretary of the Navy, attended the laying of the keel of the USS Arizona at the Brooklyn Navy Yard. Writing with vivid intimacy, Nelson traces Japan’s leaders as they lurch into ultranationalist fascism, which culminates in their scheme to terrify America with one of the boldest attacks ever waged. Within seconds, the country would never be the same.” JOE ROCHEFORT'S WAR: The Odyssey of the Codebreaker Who Outwitted Yamamoto at Midway, by Elliott Ward Carlson. This book is about so much more than what the title implies. Meticulously researched, and fascinating, it takes a close up look at all the players involved. Carlson does an excellent job chronicling events leading up to the war and beyond. “The book focuses on Rochefort’s inspiring leadership of Hypo, recording first his frustrating months in late 1941 searching for Yamamoto’s fleet, then capturing a guilt-ridden Rochefort in early 1942 mounting a redemptive effort to track that fleet after the Japanese attack at Pearl Harbor. It details his critical role in May 1942 when he and his team, against the bitter opposition of some top Navy brass, concluded Midway was Yamamoto’s invasion target, making possible a victory regarded by many as the turning point in the Pacific War.” DESPERATE SURGERY IN THE PACIFIC WAR: Doctors and Damage Control for American Wounded, 1941-1945, by Thomas Helling, MD. A close up look at war from a doctor's point of view. Though hard to read at times because of the graphic nature of the subject matter, I appreciated the infinite wisdom and compassion put forth in this book “Caring for the wounded in the World War II Pacific Theater posed serious challenges to doctors and surgeons. The thick jungles, remote atolls and heavily defended Japanese islands of the Pacific presented dangers to medical personnel never before encountered in modern warfare, as did the devastating new kamikaze attacks. Sophisticated treatments, including complex surgery, were by necessity far removed from the fighting, requiring front line doctors to do the minimum--often under fire--to stabilize patients until they could be evacuated: "damage control," it would later be called. Navy doctors responsible for thousands of sailors aboard fleets in battle found caring for the wounded daunting or nearly impossible. Yet to save lives, medical resources had to be kept as close as possible to the action. This book systematically details the efforts and innovations of the doctors and surgeons who worked to preserve life under extreme peril.” Much Aloha, Sara Ackerman Are you traveling to Hawaii soon and looking for some fabulous Hawaii reads? Or maybe you just love books about faraway and exotic places. Or possibly you live here and enjoy stories of our islands. However you slice it, these are a few of my recent Hawaii favorites as well as two that release this year (one of them is mine, but I couldn't resist). Three are fiction and three are narrative nonfiction. Enjoy!
RED SKY OVER HAWAII "With effortless prose, Ackerman skillfully navigates the early days of WWII with captivating characters bonded by circumstance. Mystery and magic are woven around Lana and the pages of this book, delivering a beautiful and thoughtful novel that pays tribute to the lore of the islands, their people, and those who stand up for the ones who cannot." –Noelle Salazar, bestselling author of The Flight Girls Inspired by real places and events, Red Sky Over Hawaii immerses the reader in a time of American history full of suspicion and peril in this lush and poignant tale. The attack on Pearl Harbor changes everything for Lana Hitchcock. Arriving home on the Big Island too late to reconcile with her estranged father, she is left alone to untangle the clues of his legacy, which lead to a secret property tucked away in the remote rain forest of Kilauea volcano. When the government starts taking away her neighbors as suspected sympathizers, Lana shelters two young German girls, a Japanese fisherman, and his son. As tensions escalate, they are forced into hiding—only to discover the hideaway house is not what they expected. When a detainment camp is established nearby, Lana struggles to keep the secrets of those in her care. Trust could have dangerous consequences. As their lives weave together, Lana begins to understand the true meaning of family and how the bonds of love carry us through the worst times. SHARKS IN THE TIME OF SAVIORS by Kawai Strong Washburn I have not read this yet, but I have heard great things and can't wait to get ahold of it when it releases on March 3d. Sharks in the Time of Saviors is a groundbreaking debut novel that folds the legends of Hawai’ian gods into an engrossing family saga; a story of exile and the pursuit of salvation from Kawai Strong Washburn. In 1995 Kailua-Kona, Hawaii, on a rare family vacation, seven-year-old Nainoa Flores falls overboard a cruise ship into the Pacific Ocean. When a shiver of sharks appears in the water, everyone fears for the worst. But instead, Noa is gingerly delivered to his mother in the jaws of a shark, marking his story as the stuff of legends. Nainoa’s family, struggling amidst the collapse of the sugarcane industry, hails his rescue as a sign of favor from ancient Hawaiian gods—a belief that appears validated after he exhibits puzzling new abilities. But as time passes, this supposed divine favor begins to drive the family apart: Nainoa, working now as a paramedic on the streets of Portland, struggles to fathom the full measure of his expanding abilities; further north in Washington, his older brother Dean hurtles into the world of elite college athletics, obsessed with wealth and fame; while in California, risk-obsessed younger sister Kaui navigates an unforgiving academic workload in an attempt to forge her independence from the family’s legacy. When supernatural events revisit the Flores family in Hawai’i—with tragic consequences—they are all forced to reckon with the bonds of family, the meaning of heritage, and the cost of survival. DRAGONFRUIT by Malia Mattoch McManus This book packs a ton of history into every page. Heartbreaking and eye opening, it is a thoroughly enjoyable read. HAWAI'I, 1891. As the heiress to a plantation fortune, Eliza Dawson occupies a privileged place in the opulent court of Hawaii's King Kalakaua. But her secret plan to marry the son of an opium tycoon collapses when political crisis forces him to China. Pregnant and desperate to keep her child, Eliza must wed an opportunistic rancher on the remote island of Moloka'i. After a devastating fire, Eliza makes a daring escape to Honolulu on the eve of the American overthrow and joins the clandestine fight to restore the Hawaiian monarchy. When a mysterious figure from Moloka'i reveals powerful secrets, only one man can help Eliza find the truth-her first love. But soon, their search for answers threatens to unravel the life she's rebuilt in a dramatically changed Hawai'i. Dragonfruit is both a vivid portrait of Hawai'i in a time of historic upheaval and the story of a woman shaped by love, betrayal, and the intoxicating power of the past. THE THREE YEAR SWIM CLUB by Julie Checkoway A fascinating story that shines a light on a very little known piece of history. My favorite part was reading about the kids. Such heart and determination! The New York Times bestselling inspirational story of impoverished children who transformed themselves into world-class swimmers. In 1937, a schoolteacher on the island of Maui challenged a group of poverty-stricken sugar plantation kids to swim upstream against the current of their circumstance. The goal? To become Olympians. They faced seemingly insurmountable obstacles. The children were Japanese-American and were malnourished and barefoot. They had no pool; they trained in the filthy irrigation ditches that snaked down from the mountains into the sugarcane fields. Their future was in those same fields, working alongside their parents in virtual slavery, known not by their names but by numbered tags that hung around their necks. Their teacher, Soichi Sakamoto, was an ordinary man whose swimming ability didn't extend much beyond treading water. In spite of everything, including the virulent anti-Japanese sentiment of the late 1930s, in their first year the children outraced Olympic athletes twice their size; in their second year, they were national and international champs, shattering American and world records and making headlines from L.A. to Nazi Germany. In their third year, they'd be declared the greatest swimmers in the world. But they'd also face their greatest obstacle: the dawning of a world war and the cancellation of the Games. Still, on the battlefield, they'd become the 20th century's most celebrated heroes, and in 1948, they'd have one last chance for Olympic glory. THE LAST VOLCANO by John Dvorak I loved this book! Though it's non-fiction, it reads like a page turner and has some fascinating Hawaiian history to boot. Highly recommend. Ranging from Yellowstone in Wyoming to Mount Pelee in the Caribbean, from Bogoslof and Pavlov in Alaska, to Sakurajima in Japan, and, finally, to the massive volcanoes of Kilauea and Mauna Loa in Hawaii―The Last Volcano reveals the incredible journey of a man on a mission to understand the awesome power of volcanic eruptions. Volcanoes have fascinated―and terrified―people for ages. They have destroyed cities and ended civilizations. John Dvorak, the acclaimed author of Earthquake Storms, looks into the early scientific study of volcanoes and the life of the man who pioneered the field, Thomas Jaggar. Educated at Harvard, Jaggar went to the Caribbean after Mount Pelee exploded in 1902, killing more than 26,000 people. Witnessing the destruction and learning about the horrible deaths these people had suffered, Jaggar vowed to dedicate himself to a study of volcanoes. What followed was fifty years of global travel to eruptions in Italy, Alaska, Central America, Japan and the Pacific. In 1912, he built a small science station at the edge of a lake of molten lava at Kilauea volcano in the Hawaiian Islands, with the goal of solving the mystery of why volcanoes erupt and how they could be predicted. Jaggar found something else at Kilauea: true love. She was Isabel Maydwell, a widowed school teacher who came to Kilauea to restart her life. For more than twenty ears, she and Jaggar ran the science station, living in a small house at the edge of a high cliff that overlooked the lava lake. Maydwell would quickly becoming one of the world’s most astute observers of volcanic activity. Mixed with tales of myths and rituals, as well as the author’s own experiences and insight into volcanic activity, The Last Volcano reveals the lure and romance of confronting nature in its most magnificent form―the edge of a volcanic eruption. ALOHA RODEO by David Wolman and Julian Smith Another fabulous, well researched and well written book. A story that will have you cheering these boys on from your couch or chair or wherever you may be reading. The triumphant true story of the native Hawaiian cowboys who shocked America at the 1908 world rodeo championships In August 1908, three unknown riders arrived in Cheyenne, Wyoming, their hats adorned with wildflowers, to compete in the world’s greatest rodeo. Steer-roping virtuoso Ikua Purdy and his cousins Jack Low and Archie Ka’au’a had travelled 4,200 miles from Hawaii, of all places, to test themselves against the toughest riders in the West. Dismissed by whites, who considered themselves the only true cowboys, the native Hawaiians would astonish the country, returning home champions—and American legends. An unforgettable human drama set against the rough-knuckled frontier, David Wolman and Julian Smith’s Aloha Rodeo unspools the fascinating and little-known true story of the Hawaiian cowboys, or paniolo, whose 1908 adventure upended the conventional history of the American West. What few understood when the three paniolo rode into Cheyenne is that the Hawaiians were no underdogs. They were the product of a deeply engrained cattle culture that was twice as old as that of the Great Plains, for Hawaiians had been chasing cattle over the islands’ rugged volcanic slopes and through thick tropical forests since the late 1700s. Tracing the life story of Purdy and his cousins, Wolman and Smith delve into the dual histories of ranching and cowboys in the islands, and the meteoric rise and sudden fall of Cheyenne, “Holy City of the Cow.” At the turn of the twentieth century, larger-than-life personalities like “Buffalo Bill” Cody and Theodore Roosevelt capitalized on a national obsession with the Wild West and helped transform Cheyenne’s annual Frontier Days celebration into an unparalleled rodeo spectacle, the “Daddy of ‘em All.” The hopes of all Hawaii rode on the three riders’ shoulders during those dusty days in August 1908. The U.S. had forcibly annexed the islands just a decade earlier. The young Hawaiians brought the pride of a people struggling to preserve their cultural identity and anxious about their future under the rule of overlords an ocean away. In Cheyenne, they didn’t just astound the locals; they also overturned simplistic thinking about cattle country, the binary narrative of “cowboys versus Indians,” and the very concept of the Wild West. Blending sport and history, while exploring questions of identity, imperialism, and race, Aloha Rodeo spotlights an overlooked and riveting chapter in the saga of the American West. Aloha!! 1. Be Smitten. Have a book idea that you are in love with. Your idea is the spark that sets everything in motion so it has to be near and dear to your heart. Remember, writing a novel is a long-term project, one that will take months or years to complete and you need to be fully invested. For me, the idea has usually been germinating for some time–in some cases a whole lifetime–and I’ve been daydreaming about it and looking at it from various angles and seeing how this idea would best be told in story form. I call this my Big Idea phase, when I walk around in a daze and stare out the window for extended periods of time. Daydreaming is an author’s best friend. This is where I ponder what I want to say and who I want to say it about. I also keep a notebook handy and write down all kinds of random thoughts. These notes come in handy later when I am developing my characters or trying to figure out where to go next.
2. Research Loves You. A little research goes a long way. Before I begin writing, and even before I begin plotting (though I am more of a Panster because I love surprises) I begin to pore through books, Google strange subjects, visit places that relate to my Big Idea and talk story with people in the know. One thing I find fascinating at this phase is how once you put it out there, new information often comes to light that falls right in line with your Big Idea. Not only that, but I often find entire story threads come about through following research down a rabbit hole. You never know what juicy morsels you might end up with. Story research is not the only thing I do. I often re-read my favorite books on writing before I begin a new novel, especially Wired For Story by Lisa Cron. This way, I avoid pitfalls and create enough conflict (my biggest struggle) and keep the story tight. 3. Plot Points. This is where I sit down and write out (in kindergarten language) what my main character wants, how she will go about trying to get it, and what stands in her way. I keep this to four or five sentences and do the same for each subplot. For a story to work for me and be meaty enough to keep people interested (myself included), I usually have no fewer than three subplots. I have found that one usually involves animals because I love animals and can’t imagine writing books that don’t include animals. Here is an example of one of my WIPs: Motivation. Amelia wants to get rid of hives and find true love (even though she has convinced herself it isn’t necessary). She also wants to gain confidence and become a chef, she likes to cook (the witch in her blood). Quite the masterpiece isn’t it? I will also write a list of events/situations that I want to happen along the way. A note on plotting: plots, stories, and characters often change, but it’s always good to have a jumping off point. 4. Making New Friends. During my Big Idea phase, I know who the main characters are but not that much about them yet. Now, I flesh out each one and write a short bio including physical description and background info, and go so far as pinning photos on my bulletin board. For my most recent WIP I found old photos of a movie star who embodied my main character. This makes it impossible to forget that her eyes are green or the texture of her hair. However, I don’t go overboard and write five million odd facts about my characters and interview them with questions like do you prefer Pepsi or Coke? I learn most about my characters while I am writing the novel and see how they interact with other characters and how they sound while speaking. Which brings me to a fun fact: new characters walk into the story on their own sometimes. A few of my favorite characters along the way were ones I had no idea about until the very point in the story where they showed up. 5. Chair Work. Sitting down and beginning your novel might be the hardest part of all. Blank pages are scary to me and I have to remind myself that I am going to come back and change the first chapter anyway, so just START AND DON’T WORRY ABOUT IT! This is easier said than done, but trust me, you will love the feeling of suddenly having words on the page. Begin your story just before something big is about to happen, when life as your characters know it is about to unravel. Don’t start with backstory, and write in scenes as much as possible. The magical sense of entering a novel adventure deserves a celebration and I say reward yourself with something nice. I like to splurge on a brand new scented candle that I will light every morning when I write. Coconut and vanilla are some of my favorite smells, which is why I had Book Scents cook up a Hawaiian Coconut Pie candle inspired by my novel Island of Sweet Pies and Soldiers. 6. Writerly Habits. By no means am I an obsessive person, but I have found that when it comes to writing and other things that I love (yoga and being outside in nature, to name a few), I possess a certain amount of discipline to make stuff happen. Discipline is essential in slogging through a novel, and this is why being in love with your Big Idea is so urgent. When I am in the midst of writing a novel, I often have that Christmas morning feeling where I can’t wait to get typing and see what’s going to happen next. That is what keeps me at it. My weekly goal is 5,000 words and I usually take off one or two days a week because I have a life that sometimes gets in the way. Given the choice, I would write seven days a week until the novel is done. This is not to say that writing is easy, because let me tell you, some days I know I am writing crap, but I keep at it because I have learned to trust the process. I write without much editing (that can wait until the next draft) and when I am stuck, I keep at it. 7. Saving Grace. My favorite piece of writerly advice came early on, which I am thankful for. I have no idea where I originally heard these words, but I’ve seen them in various iterations over the years. The gist is this: when you leave off writing for the day, stop mid-scene or begin another scene so that you have a smooth entry point the following day. You won’t have to sit there staring at a blank page thinking, hmm, what the #$%& am I going to write? Instead, you sit down and begin typing or scribbling away. I believe this little tidbit has single-handedly saved me from getting writer’s block. 8. The Hardest Part. Did I say that starting was the hardest part? I meant that. I also meant to say that the middle and the ending are the hardest parts, too! Sad, but true. There is always that middle section that feels like it’s sagging. I think to myself, yikes how I am I going to keep this story going for another forty thousand words? The trick is, ignore that voice and keep on plugging away. You can always add or delete later. In my case it tends to be adding, because I always worry about boring people with too many details and end up needing to deepen parts during my revisions. And then you approach the ending and you wonder how on earth you are going to wrap up all these loose ends and give the reader that big reveal and the soul satisfying ending. In my experience, it helps to reexamine how other brilliant authors ended their books and learn from them. Will your ending be happy, hopeful, unresolved, or downright heartbreaking? The choice is yours, and that is the beauty of being the author. 9. In The Closet. There is a good reason everyone recommends putting your manuscript away for at least a month and more if you can bear it. All that time–the more the better–helps you to see it with fresh eyes when you read it again. I have waited as few as two weeks and as long as six months, and I can tell you, the longer the better. This is also the point in your process when you discover that the book you pulled out of the closet is not the best book ever written, but is flawed and imperfect and in need of a ridiculous amount of editing. That is okay, it is part of the process. Accept it and persevere. Aside from this, not only do you have a new perspective on your draft, but your unconscious mind has also had a chance to work behind the scenes and when it comes to revision time, new ideas and solutions often seem to pop up miraculously. In this business, your unconscious mind is your best friend. Feed it and give it space and it will serve you well in both the writing and editing processes. I do believe there is a magical quality to writing and that stories write themselves if we get out of the way and let them. It is my favorite part of writing! 10. Revise, revise, repeat. Many of us have to be our own editors. This is okay to a point, but I can’t say enough about the value of a great editor. Friends and critique partners are less expensive and also wonderful, but nothing can replace an editor who knows her (or his) stuff. In the meantime, I find the book Stein on Writing to be a valuable aid. Also, I read aloud as I go. Writing in novels is far more conversational than more formal writing and the words should have a comfortable rhythm and flow when spoken. This may feel weird at first, but it is an essential component to revising. Another brilliant piece of advice that I picked up from author Mark Childress goes something like this: 1st Draft, let it rip, write from the heart. 1st revision, up the stakes in each chapter and whole book. 2nd revision, read through for character arcs (a whole read-through for each main character). 3d revision, make sure the setting speaks to the reader and portrays the theme. 4th revision, go through again and make the language shine. We learn by doing, so don’t be afraid to jump in, get that book written, and hunker down for many rounds of editing. The more you write, the better you will get, as long as you keep an open mind and look at feedback from others as a chance to improve and not a dagger through your heart. Writing is a journey that is not always easy, but is always rewarding. If you love books as much as I do, and see them as the “uniquely portable magic” that they are, then you will know what an honor it is to complete one. Lastly, keep in mind that this is what works for me and as you continue along your way, you will find what works for best you. Happy writing! #Bookstagram is a thing. A real thing. A big thing!
Rewind to early 2018. As an author with a debut novel coming out, I was surprised when my agent told me I should be spending at least an hour a day on social media. Gulp. By all accounts, it sounded like Twitter and Facebook were the biggies. I should have at least a quadruple digit following on Twitter and engage with all my fans regularly on Facebook. All my fans being my mom and dog and cat. My agent, however, told me not to discount Instagram, as it very visual and since I live in Hawaii, it would be perfect for me. At that point, I was comfortable with Facebook and I used Instagram loosely, all personal stuff. I took my agent’s advice and began my investigation into #bookstagram, and my mind was blown. Books with a cute Great Dane, books with pies, books with blankets, books on the beach, books on dinner trays, books in candlelight, stacks of books, amazing libraries of books, books and coffee, books in hands, books taking a bath. Millions and millions of bookish pictures are curated and plastered across our phones and laptops every day. Not only are there pictures, but there are also thoughtful reviews and five-star ratings. And giveaways. The number of giveaways sent my mind spinning. I began following those who posted about books I liked, those with eye-catching pictures and those who sounded funny and interesting. I also noted how many followers these people have and discovered some in the hundreds of thousands. What? There is also the matter of #hashtags. Of course, there are the obvious, but other common ones are #bookish #bookworm #bibliophile #bookaholic #TBR #instabook #fortheloveofbooks #amreading #partner and zillions more. What does #partner mean? In this day and age, popular reviewers are sent tons of books every week to read in hopes that they will then post pretty pictures and reviews. Turns out the FTC has recently cracked down and if you receive something free and are sharing about it, you must disclose that. People have to thank the publisher or author for sending them a free book, so as to not mislead people who might otherwise believe they bought it. I began my foray into taking shots of my novel one fine winter day. I picked a bunch of colorful hibiscus in my yard, waited for the right sunlight and snapped some shots. I was completely absorbed. A little while later, I noticed my neighbor giving me funny looks from across the hedge. “Don’t mind me, just taking some pictures of my...book!” The first time always feels weird, but then you get into the swing of things. I’m not going to lie, my first book, Island of Sweet Pies and Soldiers, has a pretty cover (so does my second, The Lieutenant’s Nurse, but it wasn’t born yet). The book is set in Hawaii, and it looks gorgeous with flowers and on the beach, or sitting on a rock by a mountain stream. For a while there, I started taking my book with me everywhere, and sneaking shots. My boyfriend thought I was losing my mind. I flung myself into the #bookstagram world, though I fear I may have been annoying my friends and followers with too many posts at first. How much does one post without becoming repetitive? With Instagram, people say every few days is good, though some reviewers think of it as job and post daily. I like every three or four days, and I post about life and nature between book shots. Mixing it up is key. To get my book out there (my publisher sent ARCs to the big influencers, but I like a lot of the small ones too), I contacted #bookstagrammers I admired and who might be a good fit for my book and asked if they would be interested in reading my novel. At this point, you have to zip up your thick skin and hope for the best. To my surprise, most of them agreed to, and the results were wonderful. @SheReadsWithCats is an early one that comes to mind, but there are so many. And then I discovered Instagram book tours. An Instagram tour, you say? These tours are growing more popular by the day. TLC and Suzy Approved and Passages to the Past are a few solid ones. Once you set up the tour, they pair you with people who may review your book, but more likely will post a photo and do a giveaway of your book. Which brings me to my next topic. Giveaways. As a reader, I had never engaged in the social media whirlwind of books. I just read, told a few friends if I loved a book and that was it. But now a days, readers are savvy and passionate and they take their books and book clubs seriously. A great way to share your book and gain new followers is to do a giveaway. Post a pretty pic, ask people to comment and tag a friend or two, and off you go. I learned the hard way that mailing a book from Hawaii to London is not cheap, and thus I limit my giveaway to US and Canada (where my publisher is based). I enjoy giveaways and do them every couple of months. And no need to just give away your book, give away any book. Why not share the love? My reading is far richer because of #bookstagram, but my #TBR stack is ridiculously high. Social media sometimes gets a bad rap, but I have to say that the #bookstagram community is fun and inspiring and supportive. People genuinely want to know what you are reading, what books you love, and why you love them. They want to get a glimpse into the lives of their favorite authors, and they want to share the joy of reading with the world. I enjoy #bookstagram as both an author and a reader and am thankful to take part. Another thing that arose out of this whole amazing world is that I am writing my favorite dog from Instagram (yes, I follow a few dogs) into my latest novel. I fell in love with Sailor, a Great Dane with one blue eye and one brown, and I asked her mama @love_my_dane_dolly if I could make her a character in my book. She said yes. Sadly, several months in, Sailor suddenly passed away. I was heartbroken for her family, but they gave me their blessing to keep on writing. So, I feel honored to be able to keep her memory alive. That book releases in June of 2020. I see #bookstagram as a journey, one without any real destination. And that is where the magic happens. |
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